Navigating Subtlety in Writing: When to Explain and When to Let Go

In every piece of writing, there comes a moment where the writer must decide whether to spell out a detail or let the reader figure it out on their own. This sentence alone, for instance, introduces a bit of jargon and complexity for the casual reader. But, as we'll explore below, this decision can significantly impact the reader's experience and the overall goal of the writing. The key is to strike a balanced approach that ensures your narrative remains cohesive and engaging for all readers, not just the most astute.

The Thrill of a Puzzle

There's a thrill for the reader in 'getting' a reference. It's as satisfying as cracking a code or solving a mystery. This is why many writers incorporate subtle allusions and references into their work. Take, for instance, Yiddish phrases or wordplay. These elements add color, depth, and interest. However, it's important to remember that not every reader will appreciate the nuance. In most cases, it's best to avoid overexplaining, as there's always the specter of Google (or a dictionary) to fill in the details. Or, as the article mentions, having a proper dictionary nearby often serves as a fallback.

When to Be Clear and When to Be Subtle

One of the biggest questions a writer faces is: where is the line drawn when hoping that a reader will understand a specific reference or super subtle detail? This decision is crucial, but it doesn't mean you should avoid subtle details altogether. In fact, subtle details can be a reward for readers who pay close attention, making these readers more invested in your story. However, they shouldn't be critical for the story to work. If the detail is essential for the narrative to progress, then it's best to explain it clearly and comprehensively.

Take, for instance, a historical novel set during the American Civil War. If a key plot point hinges on a specific battle that is only hinted at or referenced in a subtle manner, the reader might feel left out or confused. On the other hand, if the battle is merely a reward for those who understand the subtle implications, ensure that the overall narrative remains accessible to all readers. As a rule of thumb, if a detail is critical for the story to work, spell it out as clearly as possible.

Examples and Tips

Let's consider the writing of Terry Pratchett. He is renowned for creating a world with a rich array of subtle details that enhance the reading experience for those who pick up on them. But, crucially, his works remain engaging and meaningful for readers who don't notice these details. This balance is crucial. Another example is Martin's "A Song of Ice and Fire" series. The intricate political landscape and historical references are not only fascinating to the knowledgeable reader but also critical to the story's progression. Yet, they are not so obscure that they hinder the overall enjoyment of the story.

If you are an ace writer, you can create stories that reward the careful reader while also maintaining the engagement of those who don't immediately 'get' the subtleties. Take anything by J.K. Rowling, where each detail adds to the narrative but also allows for different layers of interpretation. Writing that is too obscure, however, can alienate readers. Some writers deliberately set out to be as obscure as possible, a strategy that appeals mainly to a small, dedicated group of readers.

Essentially, the goal should be to create a narrative that is both engaging and meaningful for a broad audience. It shouldn't turn reading into a test of one's ability to solve a cryptic crossword puzzle. The former can be enjoyable in their own right, but that should not be the primary engaging mechanism. Instead, consider the story as a whole and ensure that even if a reader doesn't pick up on the subtle references, the narrative remains intact and fulfilling.

Conclusion

Subtlety in writing is a tool that, when used correctly, can enrich and reward your readers. But, as with many things, too much of a good thing can be detrimental. It's crucial to find the balance between adding depth and ensuring your narrative remains accessible to all. Whether it's a Yiddish reference, a wordplay, or an allusion to a historical event, use them judiciously and keep the story at the forefront. Writing that balances subtlety with clarity ultimately leads to a richer and more engaging reading experience for everyone.